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So myself and lotusmomma decided we wanted to film a short film in the Film Noir style and came up with these log-lines. We can’t figure out which one we would should make as we like them all. Thoughts?

1. Vivian, a gorgeous femme fatal, finds herself moving up in the world of crime. A week after killing Dick Hampton she re-visits the crime scene to find her lover, Dicks partner, and the current lead homicide detective is out looking for her.


2. Vivian is a formerly quant nineteen forties woman who has begun a streak of ever escalating crimes, now seeking the help of her friend, a private detective named Maxwell.


3. Maxwell is former cop turned to a lowly private eye, usually working easy cases involving cheating broads with rich husbands. All this changes when one night he gets a mysterious call about a homicide from his time as a cop - the caller is the muddier victim.